Saturday, February 27, 2010

From the womb of the widowed - 55 fiction #1

55 fiction is a form of a mini fiction story to be told within the word limit of 55 words. Thanks to my dear blogger The West Wind, I discovered the thrill and challenge to think,imagine,and execute the flexibility of words and ideas and put it down on paper with a satisfaction of accomplishment.
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She plucked a white rose, and drew with her sketch pens on it. She wedded the petals to colors so bright,vibrant and exotic! She laughed in delight. Yet,she left stranded veins of the white remain..
Back at the king's palace, a girl child was born... from the womb of the widowed maid.



-Nil.

35 comments:

  1. wow, really nice! someone's really talented :)

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  2. Hope you'll forgive me right now for not fully understanding it. But I'm sure once I will, I'll find it's another fine piece of writing by one of my favourite authors :)

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  3. @DM: Eeee! Thankyou!! :)

    @Charu: Oh god,what a darling you are! Thankyou,so much:) I shall speak to you about this piece. And I hope you like it! ;)

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  4. Hey, drop by my blog sometime too, ok ?
    Hope we'll talk soon, but till then, best of luck with your studies :)

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  5. On my way :)
    Yeap,thanks. The very same to you too! :)

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  6. Excellent.
    Amazingly excellent.
    This one deserves a pat on the back.

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  7. You made my day. 3 lines, and I know you liked it. [Your short comments can tell which one you really like] heehee
    THANKS babe! :DDD

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  8. My darling,this is so well written that I'm in thoughts of how can you be so insightful and be so full of depth in this age?

    You should always keep writing,little one :-)

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  9. Thanks mashi :)
    Thanks a lot:) Yeap,shall keep writing. You can bet on that one! ;)

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  10. So beautiful .. U know it isnt believable that this is your first attempt. It is remarkable.. amazing choice of words.. with so little u could say so much more.. Keep it up

    PS: Very sorry for the late feedback.

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  11. @The West Wind: Your feedbacks are stuff that I really value! I can relate so much to you. Im on top of the world that you liked it!
    Thanks :))
    Oh and no issues!


    @Pesto: Thankyou :)

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  12. god my baby is playing with such heavy subjects with such a beautiful use of her words and creativity..leaving the dark veins the way they were, bravo!!! bravo!!

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  13. Eeeeeeeeeee!! You're baaacckkk! Imissedyouuu!!
    yayy thanks! Im gladdddddddddd you liked itt :)
    Loveee! <3

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  14. MriiiiillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII :D
    You online!?! :D Weren't you grounded,again!?! anyway,Im just happy you're hereee!! :DD

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  15. Uh,let's not like linger into that grounded story yeag =[
    It was sad.
    Whatever,
    Omg Omg OMMGGGGG HOWWWW do you WRITEE that STUFFFF?!! I mean, hello there? Ping me with the GUCCIs I don't care a hell, HOW do you write with that power? I mean,Oh my freaking hod,I could die! <3333

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  16. STOP commenting so fast okay! It freaks me out.
    Anyway,
    Thank you !! :D Lol,it's no biggie. You could write the same,honest.
    Listen,Im going to go in a bit, how long are you online?

    oh and I MISSED YOU TOO, LIKE CRAZY!!!

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  17. Teehaa! Sorry hey! =P
    yeah,I could write that hun,like fuck I could! And yeah give it to Jim to figure my hand out!
    Shut up crazy! I couldn't write am effin' word of that stuff you wrote!
    Omggg.
    =D

    I'm here for another few minutes,I guess. I need to go,too hey =[

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  18. Lol,you're so full of "Omgggggg's!!" -and OMG they're SO cute! hahaha..
    Lol,shut up idiot. You can write,bet on it.

    Ohhh yeap I need to go too man.
    Dinner served in a bit :/

    How are things,though ? :) YOU need to call me !!!

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  19. Don't bet on stuff that'll screw you in and out baby doll! =P
    Anndddd,I like OMG's =D teeehaaa! Ima gonna weiirrrrddd heyy!! =P

    Nothing really,Rohaan's a bitch, Jim's a bastard, I'm good, parents are just parents and binders are just school.

    Cool,much hey?! =P ={

    Darn it! Gotta run!
    Call you tomorrow!!
    Love love loveee youu Cherr!
    <3

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  20. Bwahahahhaah!! LOL LOLOLOLOL!!

    Yeap okay,go ahead! catch you on phone!
    love you too! yeap miss you!
    <333 Bye!

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  21. Ahh! I liked it, so colourful yet properly blunted. Good work!

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  22. Go study and all the best for the Boards :)

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  23. @nesquarx: Hi,thank you so much! :)) Do visit again :)

    @Queen: thankyou! :)

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  24. feels good to read but i must confess, I could not relate at all between the two events!

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  25. wow..i like it..beautifully written..so simple and so full of stories..keep it up :)

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  26. Actually i didnt understand it. :(

    Explain????

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