Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Their way back into Love.

Their way back into love.

Her shadow smiled an unknown dream,
the sweet wait of a rather teasing time hovered,
the tiny little forget-me-nots bloomed somewhere far away,
far away where the light wished her dawn.

As he tip-toed,
daring not to disturb the goddess of his heart,
he admired from far away,
where the robins laughed in merry.

She stood on her demies,
launched into a pirouette of euphoria,
the air sung his song,
the wonders around caressed the echo of his footsteps.

He played hide and seek,
almost floating along with her dance,
her dance to discover that one moon,
the moon she'd never considered with a spot.

And as she finally caught a glimpse,
he could hardly play along anymore,
for her face was so divine,
her smile- a silent ballet of love.....

And they both took quiet steps,
careful not to touch the elegance of time,
And they both took quiet steps to a unanimous horizon,
careful not to commove the phenomena,
the phenomena, the wonder..
the wonder that kept their wait alive,
for they both were finding their way back into love.



-Nil.

23 comments:

  1. Beautiful ............ loved your choice of words and of course your style .........

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  2. Or maybe, love is reigniting itself in them. It wasn't gone, just cloaked, as they played hide and seek for to long.

    :)
    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. ....and that's another beautiful perspective to my poem,
    thank you :)

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  4. Touching.. I loved it :D Magic with words :D

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  5. Annyesha! Hello lady, good to see you hereee!
    Thanks so much love :-)

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  6. Not much... My sms told you all! Woahhh! :D :)

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  7. Can't believe you actually took the pains of commenting! Thank you soo much, and yes your sms made my day :-)

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  8. A wonderful choice of words. it seemed to flow gracefully on the edges of our mind and made us forget...

    Beautiful :)

    As a side point, nice timing for around Valentine's day.

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  9. Charu! Hi. Thanks so much love, so glad you thought so :-)

    Anddd uugghh about Valentine's Day. I was hoping nobody said that lol :| I wrote this about three days before valentine's day, waited till the Vday fever was off and THEN put it up just so that nobody would derive that scary conclusion BUT damn you proved me wrong :|
    lol just kidding. haha but NOOO it was NOTHING related to that day at all [yes I'm very synical about it all of a sudden] :/
    am I creeping you out? :P
    -cheers!

    ;)

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  10. ^^^^does that mean you're online? Please oh please oh please?

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  11. and hey, enchanting work again, Cherr.
    where didya find the picture yo? too damn zonked!

    =)

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  12. Why, thank you so much dear Stranger :-)

    and yes, I'm online and working. Toodles for now, will have to catch you later.

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  13. IM? IM? IM? IM?
    i can't see you on gtalk =\

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  14. No. No. No.

    that's cuz I'm not on gtalk, smartie pants. Or maybe I've just deleted you off my list lol.

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  15. yo now i'm nervous? are you kidding me or something? did you seriously delete me off your list? =O

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  16. And then you claim to be smart and good at stuff like Physics and Chem which need a brain pre requisite ?

    I'm not online idiot. I'm just on blogger and wiki.
    AND happen to be working. So if you please?
    catch you later?
    I'm having a bad day Ro, don't push it.

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  17. Okay =|

    mail me whenever you're off the pissed off. [pun intended] =D

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  18. GOD RO GET OFF MY PAGE OR I'LL REPORT YOUR FRIKKIN GMAIL ABUSE.

    PUN NOT INTENDED.

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  19. Can I have ur magic pen....please please please....and what choice of words....what a mind u have darling....i so envy u :P

    But truly amazing :)

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  20. Aww thanks my love! you make my day, but you're only biased! but thanks sweetheart :)

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