(Photo by Vanta.) |
They had been
abandoned by the ankles of the woman who became the prayers of every beat
resonating around the universe. The woman said they scraped her ankles and made
them bleed of bruises. They were accused to have lost a bell here, or two
there. Apparently, they didn’t sound as sweet as her dance looked. Just how was
she to dance with them on?
And thus, abandoned, they were. Carelessly put away into the unabashedly ignored attic of the gigantic house; the one that they had won her, from His Majesty.
Every evening, they’d
be bitter kissed by another layer of dust... Flies and sly ants would walk past
the intricate blue thread work and the gold of each bell which weren't as golden
anymore. The edges of the table on which they sat withered with time, and the
room would birth nascent cobwebs and the dirge of grey into which every
element of the room camouflaged
.
.
Every element, but them.
They sat on that very table like a bold mother, pregnant with a secret. The
sheet of dust would only gather in the broken ends of each bell and accentuate
the rest of the body which spoke of age and art. Of flawlessness, of music, of
dance… of a kind of beauty that ceased to exist once they were taken off her
ankle.
They sat on that very table, listening to the woman dance
somewhere far away in the court of his majesty. They’d see her taking her first
bow and her last; they knew every breath she’d inhale after every fourth beat.
They knew every flaw in the continuation of her hurried steps, and yet those
steps were birthed in the womb of those; the ones that sat cold in that old, trivial
attic.
What a pity; thought an anonymous wise man. A wise man who existed in the motes of dust around the old room, who existed in the aroma of rose water at the majestic palace.
Her feet tremble now with the new pair of golden bells on her mended ankle. They tinkle after her feet hit the ground, not with them. They’re a proud pair of 500 bells, and yet they sound faint, shy, or rather… coward like. And the irony is, the woman knew.
Bereft from what completed her next step from the first, she
tussled with her tenacity to dance like that celebrated figurant she’d become
in that kingdom of his Majesty; the kingdom where people kissed their fingertips
to her rhythm, to her graceful glide that progressed unobstructed on the marble
floors of the court, like the breeze of the season of art.
And yet, the beauty of that figurant faded as she tried
harder and harder… for the essence of her dance lay sitting on an old table;
bold, aged, and yet gorgeous; in those blue and golden pair of ghungroos.
Quiet, incomplete, and bitterly proud; bereft of those bruised ankles.
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First proper piece of the summer, written in a strange strange mood. There y'go. Awaiting your feedback :)
Much loving,
Nil.
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First proper piece of the summer, written in a strange strange mood. There y'go. Awaiting your feedback :)
Much loving,
Nil.
brb feels.
ReplyDeleteHahah, K.
DeleteThis was amazing!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteYou da man...woman.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me so much of the film Manichitrathazhu...it's an old mallu classic but your story resonates.
In the film,a girl empathises with a long gone court-dancer,loves her,adores her,thinks she is her...and it ends up nice and scientific with MPD as the explanation.
But the feel,her trailing her fingers along those old,dust-covered ghunghroos...the same.
Love it!
Thank you, Talitha! So so kind. :)
DeleteThat. Was. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
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ReplyDeleteVery striking and vivid imagery. I didn't know dancers take breaths at fixed intervals.
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