This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 27; the 27th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'Once Again'.
Once again.
The garden was a much favored and cherished abode; my favorite wonderland in the world. It was a quiet green glass palace that buzzed of insects and moist warmth of sort; resonating green, growth and life.
Every month or two, the creepers would look slightly more taller; crawling and entangling more intimately around the blue pipes on the walls, as if playing a careless game of sheer tomfoolery.. The moss draped walls accentuated with white (almost polka dotted) bird droppings; the rather regular little visitors that would exodus and entrada as they please, when they please.
I was a little visitor, myself. I was eight, and after the garden being my favorite place in the world came our Gardener, who was my favorite person in the world; in simple words of a petite heart.
So every afternoon when Joseph watered the plants, I'd sneak in and stand behind the netted door.
"Little Missus is here" ; he'd declare in a sing-song way to which I'd stick my tongue out at his hunched back. I'd eventually slip into his lap, while his green thumb would work around the pots.
So it was just an afternoon such when I sat on Joseph's lap while he recited ridiculous and vivid fictions about the dog flowers growing into real big dogs in a month or two and how the garden would echo of barks and smell of dog litter when suddenly I stopped laughing and sat queer still.
"What happened, Missus?"
"Joseph...that butterfly is dead!" ; Joseph followed my big round teary eyes to a yellow butterfly that lay dead on of the pots.
"Did the dogs kill it?" ; my lower lip jutted out.
"Yes, Missus. The dogs..killed it."
"Mad mad mad dogs! But it was so pretty!" ; I whined.
"It was, innit? But no worries, Little Missus. The dogs left behind the baby! We'll have a pretty little butterfly soon!" ; pointed Joseph at a cocoon.
"Once again?!" ; my eyes widened.
Joseph smiled ; "Yes Missus. Once again."
............And now, it feels strange. Standing in front of the coffin of the poor gardener who taught me the motley amphitheater of life and death at eight.
"Once again, Joseph" , I kept the dog flowers on top of the coffin beneath layers of which, lay his heart.
The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.-Much love,
Nil :)
A good post and a joy to read.
ReplyDeleteHave a peaceful Sunday,
Yvonne.
Thank you, Yvonne. You,too!
DeleteNicely Written.
ReplyDeleteA good read as well.
Thank you, Ajay :)
DeleteThis was a bloody good read!
ReplyDeleteWhy, you're very kind Akanksha!
DeleteWell written as always :)
ReplyDeleteWill try to be a part of the next edition! Seems pretty cool.
Haha thanks Banerjeeee. So much niceness, you be. :) And yes, please do!
DeleteLovely, loved the conversation between him and the little missus ;-)
ReplyDeleteBy, Kappu
Aw, thanks Kappu. =)
DeleteYaar luvly, well written :)
ReplyDeletelet me say one thing u r simply awesum... great gng yaar :)
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Haha thank you, Anjali! Your responses are always so adorable!
DeleteNicely written. Life and Death .. what comes 'once again' is the real mystery!
ReplyDeleteThe point be exactly.. Thank you :)
DeleteOne round circle you drew there. Little Missus was adorable.
ReplyDeleteTo get a simple 'once again' as a topic and to come up with something as well detailed as this is bloody hard. Damn talented you are bhattacharjee!
Sammaaayyyy. Damn sweet you are Bhattacharjee! (so cool we have the same surnames eh?)
DeleteHaha thanks babe :)
Why you no visit my blog? (Yes I am that desperate NIl :P )
DeleteYes yes Bhattas rock the world!
I be on my way, Sam Beeeeee.
DeleteVery touching.. such a naive way to learn about the truth of life.. I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteWest Wind! THRILLED to see you here. Thank you!
DeleteMindblowing! :)
ReplyDeleteGracie :)
Delete=)
ReplyDeleteSmile kyaa pass kar rahi ho, Hottie Ganesha ;)
DeleteBut who could change what Joseph was to his little Missus. It has a sad, but nice end. It's peaceful, like Joseph.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
And just like that, you simply wrote the conclusion :)
DeleteThank you!
Touching and a lovely post. It captures the true emotions. All the very best and a very nice blog.
ReplyDeleteWhy, thank you so much Maverick. Good luck to you,too :)
DeleteI believe why refers to the nice blog . Well every blog is reckoned by the posts it has and writer's ability to present them. Lets say it excels at both . The pic above just adds to it.
DeleteYou're much too kind, I'm absolutely thrilled you think so. Thank you, I sure do hope you visit again :)
DeleteOnce again .. you have written a beautiful post :)
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Haha oh Bikram, what biased-ness!
DeleteImagery was always your thing, wasn't it? :)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, as always :)
Babe, if you think so, then I'd be glad,gladder,gladdest :)
DeleteThank you :)
loved the first paragraph... and the second... and the third... and the... oh wait, i loved the WHOLE thing :)
ReplyDelete"beneath the layers of which lay his heart"
touched my heart so frickin much :)
Aw thank you. You're much too kind! Thrilled to know it touched you, I sure do hope to see you around.
DeleteCheers :)
Oh my god. Wow. I can't tell you how much this post moved me. Wow.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Can you add the 'Name/URL' thingy for commenting? Because that is the only thing that works fine for me. :)
-Antara
Aw, thank youu. I'm humbled :)
DeleteAnd wait, what? I thought it was there already 0.O
Lemme go check!
Damn, I now wish I'd participated just so I could vote for you.
ReplyDelete^^^ Enough said :')
DeleteThe story of Reincarnation can be proved through your post...Butterflies are the beautiful creatures on the wonderful Land Earth...Nicely expressed u r views...:):)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vajra! Thrilled :)
DeleteFirst one to know.
ReplyDeleteLast one to comment.
You know I loved it. After all, I was there RIGHT in front of you while you were writing it down. I was the inspiration, wasn't I? ;)
Hahaha ofcourse you were, now. I met with the queen last evening,too. Did you know? ;)
DeleteNyahaha. Thenks thenks, Guinsterr. Kunzum Cafe and us clicked, I guess :D :*
The post was simply sweet yet profound, reminded me of The Last Emperor. Its a fantastic movie.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!
Why, thank you Richi! :)
DeleteShort and sweet post! Nice read!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteVery well written!!
ReplyDeleteNicely penned down. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Maryam :)
DeleteNILNILNIL!
ReplyDeleteYesss? :)
DeleteOh BTW congo on the SILVER! :D
DeleteOh, you saw? Thank you :))
DeleteCONGRATULATIONS on the BAT win :D Now I can say both my friends won :D
ReplyDeleteHaha thanks Antara! =)
DeleteMy comments on your winning! -
ReplyDelete@Kirti, Ashish and Nil - whoa!! Congratulations guys!
Your write ups on the just-crippled girl and her emotions, poem on how we deal with things once again and the lovely dialogue between the gardener/little missus has NOT failed!! ;)
SO happy for your guys!
Cheers! Do stop by my blog - Kappu!
Heyyyyy! Hi! Thank you so much, Kappu. You're much too kind. I'll be sure to stop by :)
DeleteThanks again!
Hey Nilanjana,
ReplyDeleteThat was such a meaningful story. And, it shows that you have the craft of telling. Laying down a setting, giving it life, you becoming a part of this life, a friend, stories within the story, tension, learning, peace...
I hope to visit this blog. Once again :)
Oh hi Ankit!
DeleteThrilled to see you here, indeed. Thank you so very much. You're very kind :)
I sure do hope to see you here, once again :)