tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post3071649425661622196..comments2023-10-04T21:40:24.257+05:30Comments on ~Nil.: Grace.nilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-48256431810887007522010-12-18T11:54:30.382+05:302010-12-18T11:54:30.382+05:30Another well written story. I'm glad you'r...Another well written story. I'm glad you're so open in showing your talent to the world :)Charuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881189322165051018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-17634664484878868022010-11-25T00:48:01.144+05:302010-11-25T00:48:01.144+05:30Thanks love :)Thanks love :)nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-78115101100403776052010-11-24T17:24:48.382+05:302010-11-24T17:24:48.382+05:30this is the deepest writeup i have ever read. Noth...this is the deepest writeup i have ever read. Nothing more and nothing less.Niloyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04672737652911898009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-54534962222939814492010-11-17T14:01:27.896+05:302010-11-17T14:01:27.896+05:30Thank you , so very much! :) To both of you!
<3...Thank you , so very much! :) To both of you!<br /><3nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-761299577623658172010-11-10T23:36:45.107+05:302010-11-10T23:36:45.107+05:30I'll only be repeating myself here...I love yo...I'll only be repeating myself here...I love your voice...it's refreshingly unique. And pardon me if I sound condescending but for a 16 year old (aren't you?), the choice of content is is impressive.Zlaekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732057937615529467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-77339793457906574752010-11-04T09:42:04.574+05:302010-11-04T09:42:04.574+05:30In spite of myself, I will have a couple of critic...In spite of myself, I will have a couple of critical observations too. Of course in no way what they call "expert comments", just what remains of the 'feel' & structure once the rhetoric is ingested & assimilated.<br /><br />In fact I can already see a lot of active evolution from earlier pieces, which suggests u have been taking feedback positively and in constructive light.<br />As far as I'm concerned, there are no 'do's and 'don't's here, should never be. That would be trying to lead ur individuality onto a path that is actually someone else' benchmark of prosaic styling.<br />It would be very heartening to see proof of ur hard work n ever-progressing clarity of thought in things to come - personally a great & reliable reference point which I for myself can draw inspiration from & hopefully learn a New thing or two. I know your league's way past logical ambition but I'm just glad that I can perhaps adapt the minimalistic orientation to make me sound more lucid & relevant whenever I attempt to write.<br /><br />I'll drop them off @ FB inbox where u had sent me the link.<br />Holler out when ur free, on FB. Lots to catch up on :)<br /><br />rgds,<br />SaurabhAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947474780321078641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-83739524605811004122010-11-04T09:35:54.772+05:302010-11-04T09:35:54.772+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947474780321078641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-61862043318000910342010-11-04T09:23:18.979+05:302010-11-04T09:23:18.979+05:30What to say, it's Nilastic :)Mature treatment ...What to say, it's Nilastic :)Mature treatment of an off-beat premise. You are growing as an expressionist and I am sure they only way for u, is further up. Great stuff - make sure u keep all of it well stacked, in preparation of the day of International publishing.<br /><br />Love n regds,<br />SaurabhAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947474780321078641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-36802178116222225922010-10-31T16:08:15.776+05:302010-10-31T16:08:15.776+05:30loved the fact that the writing was soo fluent, th...loved the fact that the writing was soo fluent, the descriptions were impeccable.....<br /><br />not one of the greatest twist ending stories..but liked the strange melancholy in it :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-76243060884909639492010-10-29T22:11:35.310+05:302010-10-29T22:11:35.310+05:30why thank you so much sir :)
so very kind of you!why thank you so much sir :)<br />so very kind of you!nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-5978857013517835812010-10-27T20:44:46.767+05:302010-10-27T20:44:46.767+05:30wowo .. this is a good story...
speechless I wish ...wowo .. this is a good story...<br />speechless I wish i could steal some of ur talent and write as good as that .. <br /><br />and yeah reading from the comments Mute doesnot mean deaf and dump.. <br /><br /><a href="http://mann-bikram.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Bikramjit Singh Mannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18313466956044935335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-82087878851184537522010-10-27T17:02:32.792+05:302010-10-27T17:02:32.792+05:30Hmm, will surely try n work on it! thanks a lot! :...Hmm, will surely try n work on it! thanks a lot! :)<br />oh yeah that was my favorite too :)nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-58952370441960153732010-10-25T20:06:35.212+05:302010-10-25T20:06:35.212+05:30It was...okay-ish. A bit bland.
it didnt have the ...It was...okay-ish. A bit bland.<br />it didnt have the "thing" that all the other stories of yours have.<br />But yeah, its still well written..i especially liked the whole dragonfly para :)PeaBeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08206104694247910074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-6837711565892234272010-10-25T15:34:46.739+05:302010-10-25T15:34:46.739+05:30@Somak: Heyyy, seeing you here after a long time! ...@Somak: Heyyy, seeing you here after a long time! Glad you're back, really am :)<br />Thanks, shall try and do what you mentioned.. should be interesting!<br />just let me fidn the time, and will surely try and figure it out :)<br /><br /><br />@Tbg: Hmmm. I hope you'll like the next one. Thankyou, :)nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-69728469840918605502010-10-25T13:38:59.055+05:302010-10-25T13:38:59.055+05:30Uninteresting. Well written though.Uninteresting. Well written though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-85112121957448043942010-10-25T12:55:58.365+05:302010-10-25T12:55:58.365+05:30A nice idea, but I would have liked it if there we...A nice idea, but I would have liked it if there were a few observations from the lady's perspective, specially on giving up her career and her daughter taking over.<br /><br />An "Oshmita's story" like experiment would be very suitable here.<br /><br />Cheers!Somakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11748927448230401376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-41934537380327326862010-10-24T23:00:08.297+05:302010-10-24T23:00:08.297+05:30Dear Suruchi,
wow. Lady you make my day.. You'...Dear Suruchi,<br />wow. Lady you make my day.. You're much too kind, trust me. But I couldn't be happier that you like my work. That's all that a writer hopes for :)<br />thank you so much for all your appreciation and encouragement. It keeps me going. :)<br />much muuuch love,<br />Nil.nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-40692648906206978632010-10-24T13:01:26.195+05:302010-10-24T13:01:26.195+05:30Hi Nil,
Beautiful as always...
You make me feel en...Hi Nil,<br />Beautiful as always...<br />You make me feel envious sometimes for not being able to write fiction even 1/3rd as well as you do...<br />But the next moment also proud n glad that I manage to get a good read thank to you every now and then...<br />You bring out people n situations alive...<br />You make the reader move through each line with eagerness to know more...<br />You end with a note of contentment for all those who traverse here:-)<br /><br />Great job done...I love the story:-)Suruchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08352785820589232058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-26032318562387660942010-10-23T22:17:41.437+05:302010-10-23T22:17:41.437+05:30@Shiv: Thanks babe.. Thanks so much. And trust me,...@Shiv: Thanks babe.. Thanks so much. And trust me, the phone convo made my day :)<br />thanks for so much faith, small things keep me going :)<br />Hahha! Publishing house?! Lol, yeah right! <br />=P<br /><3<br /><br /><br />@Eesha: I had the same doubt, asked around. it's not necessary. Someone who's mute needn't necessarily be deaf.<br />And now that you mentioned, I came to think of it. Yeah, the girl's name matches..nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-79481011958667986422010-10-23T21:56:23.488+05:302010-10-23T21:56:23.488+05:30Umm....just a question.....how can he hear when he...Umm....just a question.....how can he hear when he's mute??? People are usually deaf and dumb right???<br /><br />And aren't the names similar to that of the guy and girl in Chetan Bhagat's '2 States'???~Hamsini~https://www.blogger.com/profile/16835471381689306753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238275658198530393.post-18075425386956894582010-10-23T18:13:33.196+05:302010-10-23T18:13:33.196+05:30I can't get enough of it. You know my reaction...I can't get enough of it. You know my reaction. You heard me. And this is by far your best. You've outdone yourself again. You're going to go places sweetheart. Take me seriously.. Get your ass to a publishing house right about.. NOW!Splatters Of Inkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16719915078634377065noreply@blogger.com